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* 第一档:15-13分,语言正确无误,表达得体,行文流畅,要点齐全。 要点齐全 行文流畅 逻辑清楚 句式多样 深圳中考评分标准 If you were a teacher, which of the two passage would you like better? Why? Part I: Sample analysis Dear Mary, I’m so happy that you are coming to visit Shenzhen. Shenzhen is a beautiful modern city. It lies in the south of China, next to Hongkong. There are many places of interest for fun in Shenzhen. OCT East is a star attraction to make you fully relaxed. If you enjoy swimming, you can go to Dameisha. If you want to challenge yourself, the Happy Valley is the best choice. If you prefer to go shopping, there are many large shopping malls where you can buy anything you want. Dongmen is surely a good place for you to taste delicious food and local snacks, as well as the local culture. Shenzhen has something for everyone. Why

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