鲁教版七上Unit3 How was your school trip 写作专项讲解课件.ppt
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writing;Writing Aims:; My trip; ; June 23rd
Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really __________. We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of _______ and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the ________ and bought some ____. It was a great day.;Yesterday my school visited the zoo. It was really interesting. We went there by bus. At the zoo, I saw a lot of animals and I took some photos. My classmates and I also went to the gift shop and bought some gifts. It was a great day.;;;weather; ;评价标准;A档:六项内容齐全,错误3处以内。
B档:含5项内容,错误在5处以内。
C档:含4项内容,错误在7处以内。; Who wants to show yourself? 积极推荐展示组内的优秀作文吧 ;Can you talk about your trip? 〔你学会如何描述自己的一次旅行了吗?〕
Can you learn something from other’s compositions? 〔你能通过学习别人的作文而有所收获吗?〕;Guessing game;I was busy. A patient visited me last