新牛津译林版英语九年级上册第五单元全部精品课件.ppt

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五.练修改展示与评价 1.The biggest problem in my first draft is. 2. a. I try to add/cut off/change/because I hope my readers can know/understand/realizebetter. b. I make such a change in my piece because I want to express/show/find a way to c. The best words/sentences/most interesting details in my pieces are.I wrote them because. d. I am satisfied with the change most because. e. Compared with my first draft, the new version. 3. What do you think of my new piece? Can you give me some advice for future improvement? Let’s edit the first draft on your own and then show. Before class When I wrote a story, I did/didn’t. During class I make such a little/much progress in. After class I need more/ want to. Continue to edit your first draft and hand in your favourite version tomorrow. 2. Do after-school ex

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